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Teacher, teacher-
It's time for my timeout.
I'll wear the duncehat in the corner,
I really won't talk about feelings anymore.

I told you so-
I can't do this for so long.
I'll sit on the stool facing the wall.
I'll think until my head becomes pretty sore.

Yes, go ahead-
I hate this fucked up room.
Send me to the back of the class,
And I promise I won't fuck up anymore.

Teacher, teacher-
I just said a bad word.
So won't you please punish me?
Let me sit in the corner until my ass is sore.

Fucking teacher-
If you don't, I'll simply leave class.
The door's right there, I know where it is.
I just don't want to talk about my fucking feelings anymore.
:icon007-madison-at-sea:
I don't like the situation I'm in, as you can probably see.
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:icon007-bloodyalaizabel:
"I'll think until my head becomes pretty sore" - I had this random thought of it saying "my head becomes swollen and sore." The ';pretty' throws me off.

"Yes, go ahead-
I hate this fucked up room.
Send me to the back of the class,
And I promise I won't fuck up anymore." - I adore this stanza.
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:icon007-madison-at-sea:
Awh, thank you. I like swollen and sore much better.
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:icon007-bloodyalaizabel:
As do I. I"m glad you like it.
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:icon007-loneheartstring:
I don't know if you meant to write it that way, but I see it as a timeline. It seems that as the work continues, the speaker ages, becoming more and more... fed up. I hope your situation changes.
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:icon007-madison-at-sea:
I hadn't thought of it that way. I like it. x))
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~monterae Oct 1, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm sry hun <3!!!
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:icon007-madison-at-sea:
Awrhs, thank you.
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~monterae Oct 3, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:glomp:
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